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Chu Xiang learned from Zhuo Yu that the most important thing in a novel was the character (sexual xing), and he established the character, and then let the character develop various things. +++Cartino novel website www.ck101.la As for what to write and not to write, it all depends on whether the plot is useful for promoting the story. If it has little effect, then writing it out is nonsense.
Considering from this starting point, the plot line in Chu Xiang's mind is much clearer, and most of the plots that are not subject to the theme are removed.
Zhuo Yu also told her that both dog blood and exaggerated drama are needed. It is necessary for everyone to be rational and develop steadily, and to do something "consistent with common sense". It will definitely be smashed to death, and few people will watch it. . Why is gossip news always so popular? Because most people like to watch stories with intense conflicts.
See what events are on the hot search every day? How many unreasonable behaviors are brain damage? Only this is the case. The real incidents of young people with three ideals and five good views have no chance to be searched. Who will read it when written?
Originally, Zhuo Yu just wanted to say a few words briefly, but he didn't expect that Chu Xiang, a newcomer, would have a particularly good enlightenment. She could immediately understand what he said, so he was embarrassed to say too simple.
The two of them ate a meal for two hours, and Zhuo Yu told Chu Xiang a lot, from the fact that the characters cannot be too high, too low and have no sense of substitution, to the best distribution of the protagonist and supporting roles in the full text, and then what The character (guanguan) is easier to be adapted into film and television dramas.
Chu Xiang listened more and more earnestly, Zhuo Yu spoke with a dry tongue, drank his saliva and smiled: "Didn't you remember? I said too much at once."
Chu Xiang said seriously: "No, I remember it all."
"Huh? You remembered it?" Zhuo Yu laughed in surprise, "I hope it can be helpful to you. Writing such a thing, knowing that no matter how much experience you have, you must rely on yourself a little bit (touch Mo). Many times others The experience of writing is not suitable for you. It’s better to write smoothly and feel right. You just need to remember to write what you like. If you don’t like it yourself, no one will like to read what you write because there is no author’s feelings, no It may be vivid."
Chu Xiang nodded, "I know, let's go, it's late, and it won't delay your rest. I also have some thoughts, I want to write a draft, and you can tell me about the three golden chapters? I heard the first three chapters. very important."
"Okay." Zhuo Yu got up and walked out of the restaurant with Chu Xiang. On the way, he told her what elements should be written in the first three chapters, how to highlight the protagonist's (sexual) characteristics, and how to arrange conflicts.
For Chu Xiang, this knowledge is very fresh, she has never heard of it. However, she knows exactly what kind of characters (guanguan) can be adapted into film and television dramas. After all, I have been filming in the entertainment industry for a lifetime, and I can't count the scripts I have studied. It is still clear what kind of script is attractive.
She tried to combine the script with the novel. Although the difference was big, she really understood Zhuo Yu's words more easily.
Back home, she did not rush to write a deposit, but found Zhuo Yu's novel to read. While reading and comparing the knowledge points Zhuo Yu said, I gradually understood the purpose of some plots of Zhuo Yu's first three chapters, understood how to convey the characteristics of the protagonist to readers quietly, and understood each plot. Pass it down like a chain button, a little bit constantly, always making people want to know what will happen next.
When Chu Xiang saw two o'clock in the morning, he turned on the computer and started to write the outline, and then wrote a new article, saved the draft and wrote 10,000 words, after which it was dawn.
She got up and stretched, feeling neck pain, back pain, back pain, even if she had a full set of equipment, she couldn't hold her to sit and write all night. She made a cup of wolfberry tea and felt her body limp, and couldn't help but regret it a bit. She is in this (body shen) body, it's really careless that she has to take a rest for a whole day to get over.
Chu Xiang sent a message to Zhuo Yu, "I won't go to fitness today. The codewords stayed up all night and I was very tired. I guess (sleeping Shui) for one day. ]
[Zhuo Yu: Write all night? Then you hurry up and rest, your body cannot stay up late. Need to help you read the text? I'm a little bit afraid that I didn't clarify misleading you. ]
[Chu Xiang: The great **** is willing to help, but cannot ask for it. ]
Chu Xiang sent the written ten thousand characters to Zhuo Yu, and after a few words with him, he (washed xi) took a bath (sleeped Shui). After she was (sleeping Shui), the aura nourished her (bodyshen) body, slowly eliminating her exhaustion, and let her frown unconsciously in (sleeping Shui) dreams also unfolded.
Zhuo Yu took a serious look at Chu Xiang’s new draft. Since he had just read "Shang Xian", he saw the gap between Chu Xiang's new draft and "Shang Xian". Although the writing style is equally immature, the story arrangement has improved. Too much. If it is really related to the writing skills he talked about, then Chu Xiang's enlightenment is too strong, right? !
There are not many 10,000 words, and he finished reading it quickly, and there is a feeling that the meaning is still incomplete. He immediately realized that this would be a hot essay, as long as the follow-up quality is like this million characters, this essay can definitely surpass "The Fairy and Magic".
Zhuo Yu thought of Chu Xiang's words to write a new article to defeat "The Fairy and Demon", and understood that Chu Xiang was serious, and he read this article more carefully. After all, Chu Xiang is a novice, Zhuo Yu still sees some problems, he made notes in the document and made some suggestions.
After getting these things done, he was a little itchy, and he opened the codeword software and wrote an update of 20,000 words. It caused readers to come out and leave messages, asking him excitedly what a good day is today. The number of people who are getting more than 6,000 a day has increased by 20,000. Isn't it cool? It would be nice if I could do this every day.
Zhuo Yu smiled when he saw the readers' comments. It is impossible to do this every day, and it will never be possible.
Codewords are just like this. You can write 30,000 or 40,000 a day on a whim. When you don’t want to, you can’t write a hundred words. Mood is very important, and he has been affected by bad comments once. So Chu Xiang was able to calm down and write new articles at the cusp of this storm, and he wrote very well, which really surprised him.
But if you say that, Chu Xiang's psychological quality is so good, then he didn't get angry with netizens when he had a heart attack, but he misunderstood.
Zhuo Yu was about to turn off the computer when the doorbell rang. Liang Jun shouted outside the door: "Zuo Yu opens the door, I brought you a bunch of food, I can't carry it anymore, hurry up."
Zhuo Yu walked quickly to the door and opened the door, and saw Liang Jun entering the door in large and small bags, and put a lot of things on the ground, "Oh, I'm exhausted, please bring me some water. The parking space downstairs is full. Yes, I got out of the car all the way and walked all the way, exhausted."
Zhuo Yu leaned against the door and looked at him, "What are you holding? Why are you still carrying your notebook? You wouldn't be..."
"Haha, that's right, I'm here to defect to you. Zhuo Yu, eldest brother, you can take in the little brother for a few days, my house has been painted, I am afraid of any harmful gas, I can only hide in you." Liang Jun pleases Smiled and said, like a pug.
Zhuo Yu gave him a white look and went to the refrigerator to get him water. "You use environmentally friendly materials, what's the harm?"
Liang Jun grabbed water from him, and filled a half bottle of water in one breath before saying, "How can this thing be accurate? I don't understand. Be careful to sail the boat for ten thousand years, and then move in later."
"According to you, don't you plan to stay for a few days, do you plan to stay longer?"
"Good brother, what do you care about this (gan gan)? How many snacks I brought you? Let's code together, play games and eat snacks together, how beautiful?"
Zhuo Yu said silently, "Where are the two men beautiful? Alright, you clean up the guest room by yourself. I will change my clothes first and go out for lunch."
"Sure, you go." When Liang Jun sat on the sofa and put his computer on, he saw the laptop opened on the coffee table. Zhuo Yu was opening the document, and he saw the manuscript with a lot of comments at a glance. It was actually the heroine who cultivated immortality!
Liang Jun yelled like a ghost: "Zhuo Yu, what are you doing? Are you going to write on the female channel?"
Zhuo Yu just remembered the document, and said from the bedroom (exposed): "Don't rush that, it's not my manuscript. I helped others to read it. Turn off my computer."
"Oh." Liang Jun couldn't help gossip after turning off the computer, "Whose manuscript? Can you actually let Zhuo Dashen help to read it? Go to the female channel to write it, do I know? Okay, you, you have other people besides me Jiyou? Say, when did (gou) catch it?"
Zhuo Yu came out and slapped him on the back of his head, "What is the ghost roar? What (gou) can't do (gou), just met."
Liang Jun also turned his mind quickly, and immediately reacted, "The author who just met is still writing Xiu Xianwen in female frequency, isn't that Qing Xiang Chuyun??" He saw Zhuo Yu not refuting, his eyes widened. "Really? This is really Qingxiang Chuyun's manuscript? When did you two know each other so well? No, you have exchanged pen names? Didn't you say wait for the verdict to see if she copied it?"
Zhuo Yu sat at the door to change his shoes, and replied casually, "I have read the texts on both sides, and I haven't copied them at all. It is the world Wushuang who has just pulled a person and stepped on the hype. Qingxiang Chuyun is unlucky."
Liang Jun was puzzled: "You are not a person who is curious about gossip, why did you suddenly go to read their articles?"
Zhuo Yu didn't conceal it, "Qing Xiang Chuyun moved to the right door. It's a coincidence. I think I will see you when I look up and I have to figure out the truth to get along well, so I just watched it."
"She moved you to the right door?" Jun Liang felt that the world was illusory, "Is there such a coincidence in reality? What a fate is it? I thought you were empty at the door, just yelling outside... …By the way, how did you help her to change the article? Do you think she has a good character? Or sympathize with her being trampled on by the world?"
"It's just a matter of rushing to the writing, I gave her some suggestions, and she just wrote it out, I will help her see, don't mislead her." Zhuo Yu opened the door and looked back at him, "Can't you leave? Why are there so many questions about a little thing?"
"No, you Zhuo Dashen personally helped people write comments. There is no one before, you have never helped me read it, am I not curious? By the way, ask her to eat together, and introduce me to know. From now on it will be us The three looked up and looked down. They are all good neighbors."
"She wrote for one night and sleeps today. Let's talk about it another day." Zhuo Yu pulled Liang Jun into the elevator from Chu Xiang's door and went downstairs to eat.
Liang Jun looked at him and said: "I suspect that you two gave birth to something when I didn't know it, but I have no evidence."
Zhuo Yu gave him a blank look, "Take away your imagination, great writer.",,,,...,,,,
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Chu Xiang learned from Zhuo Yu that the most important thing in a novel was the character (sexual xing), and he established the character, and then let the character develop various things. +++Cartino novel website www.ck101.la As for what to write and not to write, it all depends on whether the plot is useful for promoting the story. If it has little effect, then writing it out is nonsense.
Considering from this starting point, the plot line in Chu Xiang's mind is much clearer, and most of the plots that are not subject to the theme are removed.
Zhuo Yu also told her that both dog blood and exaggerated drama are needed. It is necessary for everyone to be rational and develop steadily, and to do something "consistent with common sense". It will definitely be smashed to death, and few people will watch it. . Why is gossip news always so popular? Because most people like to watch stories with intense conflicts.
See what events are on the hot search every day? How many unreasonable behaviors are brain damage? Only this is the case. The real incidents of young people with three ideals and five good views have no chance to be searched. Who will read it when written?
Originally, Zhuo Yu just wanted to say a few words briefly, but he didn't expect that Chu Xiang, a newcomer, would have a particularly good enlightenment. She could immediately understand what he said, so he was embarrassed to say too simple.
The two of them ate a meal for two hours, and Zhuo Yu told Chu Xiang a lot, from the fact that the characters cannot be too high, too low and have no sense of substitution, to the best distribution of the protagonist and supporting roles in the full text, and then what The character (guanguan) is easier to be adapted into film and television dramas.
Chu Xiang listened more and more earnestly, Zhuo Yu spoke with a dry tongue, drank his saliva and smiled: "Didn't you remember? I said too much at once."
Chu Xiang said seriously: "No, I remember it all."
"Huh? You remembered it?" Zhuo Yu laughed in surprise, "I hope it can be helpful to you. Writing such a thing, knowing that no matter how much experience you have, you must rely on yourself a little bit (touch Mo). Many times others The experience of writing is not suitable for you. It’s better to write smoothly and feel right. You just need to remember to write what you like. If you don’t like it yourself, no one will like to read what you write because there is no author’s feelings, no It may be vivid."
Chu Xiang nodded, "I know, let's go, it's late, and it won't delay your rest. I also have some thoughts, I want to write a draft, and you can tell me about the three golden chapters? I heard the first three chapters. very important."
"Okay." Zhuo Yu got up and walked out of the restaurant with Chu Xiang. On the way, he told her what elements should be written in the first three chapters, how to highlight the protagonist's (sexual) characteristics, and how to arrange conflicts.
For Chu Xiang, this knowledge is very fresh, she has never heard of it. However, she knows exactly what kind of characters (guanguan) can be adapted into film and television dramas. After all, I have been filming in the entertainment industry for a lifetime, and I can't count the scripts I have studied. It is still clear what kind of script is attractive.
She tried to combine the script with the novel. Although the difference was big, she really understood Zhuo Yu's words more easily.
Back home, she did not rush to write a deposit, but found Zhuo Yu's novel to read. While reading and comparing the knowledge points Zhuo Yu said, I gradually understood the purpose of some plots of Zhuo Yu's first three chapters, understood how to convey the characteristics of the protagonist to readers quietly, and understood each plot. Pass it down like a chain button, a little bit constantly, always making people want to know what will happen next.
When Chu Xiang saw two o'clock in the morning, he turned on the computer and started to write the outline, and then wrote a new article, saved the draft and wrote 10,000 words, after which it was dawn.
She got up and stretched, feeling neck pain, back pain, back pain, even if she had a full set of equipment, she couldn't hold her to sit and write all night. She made a cup of wolfberry tea and felt her body limp, and couldn't help but regret it a bit. She is in this (body shen) body, it's really careless that she has to take a rest for a whole day to get over.
Chu Xiang sent a message to Zhuo Yu, "I won't go to fitness today. The codewords stayed up all night and I was very tired. I guess (sleeping Shui) for one day. ]
[Zhuo Yu: Write all night? Then you hurry up and rest, your body cannot stay up late. Need to help you read the text? I'm a little bit afraid that I didn't clarify misleading you. ]
[Chu Xiang: The great **** is willing to help, but cannot ask for it. ]
Chu Xiang sent the written ten thousand characters to Zhuo Yu, and after a few words with him, he (washed xi) took a bath (sleeped Shui). After she was (sleeping Shui), the aura nourished her (bodyshen) body, slowly eliminating her exhaustion, and let her frown unconsciously in (sleeping Shui) dreams also unfolded.
Zhuo Yu took a serious look at Chu Xiang’s new draft. Since he had just read "Shang Xian", he saw the gap between Chu Xiang's new draft and "Shang Xian". Although the writing style is equally immature, the story arrangement has improved. Too much. If it is really related to the writing skills he talked about, then Chu Xiang's enlightenment is too strong, right? !
There are not many 10,000 words, and he finished reading it quickly, and there is a feeling that the meaning is still incomplete. He immediately realized that this would be a hot essay, as long as the follow-up quality is like this million characters, this essay can definitely surpass "The Fairy and Magic".
Zhuo Yu thought of Chu Xiang's words to write a new article to defeat "The Fairy and Demon", and understood that Chu Xiang was serious, and he read this article more carefully. After all, Chu Xiang is a novice, Zhuo Yu still sees some problems, he made notes in the document and made some suggestions.
After getting these things done, he was a little itchy, and he opened the codeword software and wrote an update of 20,000 words. It caused readers to come out and leave messages, asking him excitedly what a good day is today. The number of people who are getting more than 6,000 a day has increased by 20,000. Isn't it cool? It would be nice if I could do this every day.
Zhuo Yu smiled when he saw the readers' comments. It is impossible to do this every day, and it will never be possible.
Codewords are just like this. You can write 30,000 or 40,000 a day on a whim. When you don’t want to, you can’t write a hundred words. Mood is very important, and he has been affected by bad comments once. So Chu Xiang was able to calm down and write new articles at the cusp of this storm, and he wrote very well, which really surprised him.
But if you say that, Chu Xiang's psychological quality is so good, then he didn't get angry with netizens when he had a heart attack, but he misunderstood.
Zhuo Yu was about to turn off the computer when the doorbell rang. Liang Jun shouted outside the door: "Zuo Yu opens the door, I brought you a bunch of food, I can't carry it anymore, hurry up."
Zhuo Yu walked quickly to the door and opened the door, and saw Liang Jun entering the door in large and small bags, and put a lot of things on the ground, "Oh, I'm exhausted, please bring me some water. The parking space downstairs is full. Yes, I got out of the car all the way and walked all the way, exhausted."
Zhuo Yu leaned against the door and looked at him, "What are you holding? Why are you still carrying your notebook? You wouldn't be..."
"Haha, that's right, I'm here to defect to you. Zhuo Yu, eldest brother, you can take in the little brother for a few days, my house has been painted, I am afraid of any harmful gas, I can only hide in you." Liang Jun pleases Smiled and said, like a pug.
Zhuo Yu gave him a white look and went to the refrigerator to get him water. "You use environmentally friendly materials, what's the harm?"
Liang Jun grabbed water from him, and filled a half bottle of water in one breath before saying, "How can this thing be accurate? I don't understand. Be careful to sail the boat for ten thousand years, and then move in later."
"According to you, don't you plan to stay for a few days, do you plan to stay longer?"
"Good brother, what do you care about this (gan gan)? How many snacks I brought you? Let's code together, play games and eat snacks together, how beautiful?"
Zhuo Yu said silently, "Where are the two men beautiful? Alright, you clean up the guest room by yourself. I will change my clothes first and go out for lunch."
"Sure, you go." When Liang Jun sat on the sofa and put his computer on, he saw the laptop opened on the coffee table. Zhuo Yu was opening the document, and he saw the manuscript with a lot of comments at a glance. It was actually the heroine who cultivated immortality!
Liang Jun yelled like a ghost: "Zhuo Yu, what are you doing? Are you going to write on the female channel?"
Zhuo Yu just remembered the document, and said from the bedroom (exposed): "Don't rush that, it's not my manuscript. I helped others to read it. Turn off my computer."
"Oh." Liang Jun couldn't help gossip after turning off the computer, "Whose manuscript? Can you actually let Zhuo Dashen help to read it? Go to the female channel to write it, do I know? Okay, you, you have other people besides me Jiyou? Say, when did (gou) catch it?"
Zhuo Yu came out and slapped him on the back of his head, "What is the ghost roar? What (gou) can't do (gou), just met."
Liang Jun also turned his mind quickly, and immediately reacted, "The author who just met is still writing Xiu Xianwen in female frequency, isn't that Qing Xiang Chuyun??" He saw Zhuo Yu not refuting, his eyes widened. "Really? This is really Qingxiang Chuyun's manuscript? When did you two know each other so well? No, you have exchanged pen names? Didn't you say wait for the verdict to see if she copied it?"
Zhuo Yu sat at the door to change his shoes, and replied casually, "I have read the texts on both sides, and I haven't copied them at all. It is the world Wushuang who has just pulled a person and stepped on the hype. Qingxiang Chuyun is unlucky."
Liang Jun was puzzled: "You are not a person who is curious about gossip, why did you suddenly go to read their articles?"
Zhuo Yu didn't conceal it, "Qing Xiang Chuyun moved to the right door. It's a coincidence. I think I will see you when I look up and I have to figure out the truth to get along well, so I just watched it."
"She moved you to the right door?" Jun Liang felt that the world was illusory, "Is there such a coincidence in reality? What a fate is it? I thought you were empty at the door, just yelling outside... …By the way, how did you help her to change the article? Do you think she has a good character? Or sympathize with her being trampled on by the world?"
"It's just a matter of rushing to the writing, I gave her some suggestions, and she just wrote it out, I will help her see, don't mislead her." Zhuo Yu opened the door and looked back at him, "Can't you leave? Why are there so many questions about a little thing?"
"No, you Zhuo Dashen personally helped people write comments. There is no one before, you have never helped me read it, am I not curious? By the way, ask her to eat together, and introduce me to know. From now on it will be us The three looked up and looked down. They are all good neighbors."
"She wrote for one night and sleeps today. Let's talk about it another day." Zhuo Yu pulled Liang Jun into the elevator from Chu Xiang's door and went downstairs to eat.
Liang Jun looked at him and said: "I suspect that you two gave birth to something when I didn't know it, but I have no evidence."
Zhuo Yu gave him a blank look, "Take away your imagination, great writer.",,,,...,,,,
Chu Xiang learned from Zhuo Yu that the most important thing in a novel was the character sexual xing, and he established the character, and then let the character develop various things. +++Cartino novel website www.ck101.la As for what to write and not to write, it all depends on whether the plot is useful for promoting the story. If it has little effect, then writing it out is nonsense.Considering from this starting point, the plot line in Chu Xiang's mind is much clearer, and most of the plots that are not subject to the theme are removed.Zhuo Yu also told her that both dog blood and exaggerated drama are needed. It is necessary for everyone to be rational and develop steadily, and to do something "consistent with common sense". It will definitely be smashed to death, and few people will watch it. . Why is gossip news always so popular? Because most people like to watch stories with intense conflicts.See what events are on the hot search every day? How many unreasonable behaviors are brain damage? Only this is the case. The real incidents of young people with three ideals and five good views have no chance to be searched. Who will read it when written?Originally, Zhuo Yu just wanted to say a few words briefly, but he didn't expect that Chu Xiang, a newcomer, would have a particularly good enlightenment. She could immediately understand what he said, so he was embarrassed to say too simple.The two of them ate a meal for two hours, and Zhuo Yu told Chu Xiang a lot, from the fact that the characters cannot be too high, too low and have no sense of substitution, to the best distribution of the protagonist and supporting roles in the full text, and then what The character guanguan is easier to be adapted into film and television dramas.Chu Xiang listened more and more earnestly, Zhuo Yu spoke with a dry tongue, drank his saliva and smiled: "Didn't you remember? I said too much at once."Chu Xiang said seriously: "No, I remember it all.""Huh? You remembered it?" Zhuo Yu laughed in surprise, "I hope it can be helpful to you. Writing such a thing, knowing that no matter how much experience you have, you must rely on yourself a little bit touch Mo. Many times others The experience of writing is not suitable for you. It's better to write smoothly and feel right. You just need to remember to write what you like. If you don't like it yourself, no one will like to read what you write because there is no author's feelings, no It may be vivid."Chu Xiang nodded, "I know, let's go, it's late, and it won't delay your rest. I also have some thoughts, I want to write a draft, and you can tell me about the three golden chapters? I heard the first three chapters. very important.""Okay." Zhuo Yu got up and walked out of the restaurant with Chu Xiang. On the way, he told her what elements should be written in the first three chapters, how to highlight the protagonist's sexual characteristics, and how to arrange conflicts.For Chu Xiang, this knowledge is very fresh, she has never heard of it. However, she knows exactly what kind of characters guanguan can be adapted into film and television dramas. After all, I have been filming in the entertainment industry for a lifetime, and I can't count the scripts I have studied. It is still clear what kind of script is attractive.She tried to combine the script with the novel. Although the difference was big, she really understood Zhuo Yu's words more easily.Back home, she did not rush to write a deposit, but found Zhuo Yu's novel to read. While reading and comparing the knowledge points Zhuo Yu said, I gradually understood the purpose of some plots of Zhuo Yu's first three chapters, understood how to convey the characteristics of the protagonist to readers quietly, and understood each plot. Pass it down like a chain button, a little bit constantly, always making people want to know what will happen next.When Chu Xiang saw two o'clock in the morning, he turned on the computer and started to write the outline, and then wrote a new article, saved the draft and wrote 10,000 words, after which it was dawn.She got up and stretched, feeling neck pain, back pain, back pain, even if she had a full set of equipment, she couldn't hold her to sit and write all night. She made a cup of wolfberry tea and felt her body limp, and couldn't help but regret it a bit. She is in this body shen body, it's really careless that she has to take a rest for a whole day to get over.Chu Xiang sent a message to Zhuo Yu, "I won't go to fitness today. The codewords stayed up all night and I was very tired. I guess sleeping Shui for one day. Zhuo Yu: Write all night? Then you hurry up and rest, your body cannot stay up late. Need to help you read the text? I'm a little bit afraid that I didn't clarify misleading you. Chu Xiang: The great **** is willing to help, but cannot ask for it. Chu Xiang sent the written ten thousand characters to Zhuo Yu, and after a few words with him, he washed xi took a bath sleeped Shui. After she was sleeping Shui, the aura nourished her bodyshen body, slowly eliminating her exhaustion, and let her frown unconsciously in sleeping Shui dreams also unfolded.Zhuo Yu took a serious look at Chu Xiang's new draft. Since he had just read "Shang Xian", he saw the gap between Chu Xiang's new draft and "Shang Xian". Although the writing style is equally immature, the story arrangement has improved. Too much. If it is really related to the writing skills he talked about, then Chu Xiang's enlightenment is too strong, right? !There are not many 10,000 words, and he finished reading it quickly, and there is a feeling that the meaning is still incomplete. He immediately realized that this would be a hot essay, as long as the follow-up quality is like this million characters, this essay can definitely surpass "The Fairy and Magic".Zhuo Yu thought of Chu Xiang's words to write a new article to defeat "The Fairy and Demon", and understood that Chu Xiang was serious, and he read this article more carefully. After all, Chu Xiang is a novice, Zhuo Yu still sees some problems, he made notes in the document and made some suggestions.After getting these things done, he was a little itchy, and he opened the codeword software and wrote an update of 20,000 words. It caused readers to come out and leave messages, asking him excitedly what a good day is today. The number of people who are getting more than 6,000 a day has increased by 20,000. Isn't it cool? It would be nice if I could do this every day.Zhuo Yu smiled when he saw the readers' comments. It is impossible to do this every day, and it will never be possible.Codewords are just like this. You can write 30,000 or 40,000 a day on a whim. When you don't want to, you can't write a hundred words. Mood is very important, and he has been affected by bad comments once. So Chu Xiang was able to calm down and write new articles at the cusp of this storm, and he wrote very well, which really surprised him.But if you say that, Chu Xiang's psychological quality is so good, then he didn't get angry with netizens when he had a heart attack, but he misunderstood.Zhuo Yu was about to turn off the computer when the doorbell rang. Liang Jun shouted outside the door: "Zuo Yu opens the door, I brought you a bunch of food, I can't carry it anymore, hurry up."Zhuo Yu walked quickly to the door and opened the door, and saw Liang Jun entering the door in large and small bags, and put a lot of things on the ground, "Oh, I'm exhausted, please bring me some water. The parking space downstairs is full. Yes, I got out of the car all the way and walked all the way, exhausted."Zhuo Yu leaned against the door and looked at him, "What are you holding? Why are you still carrying your notebook? You wouldn't be...""Haha, that's right, I'm here to defect to you. Zhuo Yu, eldest brother, you can take in the little brother for a few days, my house has been painted, I am afraid of any harmful gas, I can only hide in you." Liang Jun pleases Smiled and said, like a pug.Zhuo Yu gave him a white look and went to the refrigerator to get him water. "You use environmentally friendly materials, what's the harm?"Liang Jun grabbed water from him, and filled a half bottle of water in one breath before saying, "How can this thing be accurate? I don't understand. Be careful to sail the boat for ten thousand years, and then move in later.""According to you, don't you plan to stay for a few days, do you plan to stay longer?""Good brother, what do you care about this gan gan? How many snacks I brought you? Let's code together, play games and eat snacks together, how beautiful?"Zhuo Yu said silently, "Where are the two men beautiful? Alright, you clean up the guest room by yourself. I will change my clothes first and go out for lunch.""Sure, you go." When Liang Jun sat on the sofa and put his computer on, he saw the laptop opened on the coffee table. Zhuo Yu was opening the document, and he saw the manuscript with a lot of comments at a glance. It was actually the heroine who cultivated immortality!Liang Jun yelled like a ghost: "Zhuo Yu, what are you doing? Are you going to write on the female channel?"Zhuo Yu just remembered the document, and said from the bedroom exposed: "Don't rush that, it's not my manuscript. I helped others to read it. Turn off my computer.""Oh." Liang Jun couldn't help gossip after turning off the computer, "Whose manuscript? Can you actually let Zhuo Dashen help to read it? Go to the female channel to write it, do I know? Okay, you, you have other people besides me Jiyou? Say, when did gou catch it?"Zhuo Yu came out and slapped him on the back of his head, "What is the ghost roar? What gou can't do gou, just met."Liang Jun also turned his mind quickly, and immediately reacted, "The author who just met is still writing Xiu Xianwen in female frequency, isn't that Qing Xiang Chuyun??" He saw Zhuo Yu not refuting, his eyes widened. "Really? This is really Qingxiang Chuyun's manuscript? When did you two know each other so well? No, you have exchanged pen names? Didn't you say wait for the verdict to see if she copied it?"Zhuo Yu sat at the door to change his shoes, and replied casually, "I have read the texts on both sides, and I haven't copied them at all. It is the world Wushuang who has just pulled a person and stepped on the hype. Qingxiang Chuyun is unlucky."Liang Jun was puzzled: "You are not a person who is curious about gossip, why did you suddenly go to read their articles?"Zhuo Yu didn't conceal it, "Qing Xiang Chuyun moved to the right door. It's a coincidence. I think I will see you when I look up and I have to figure out the truth to get along well, so I just watched it.""She moved you to the right door?" Jun Liang felt that the world was illusory, "Is there such a coincidence in reality? What a fate is it? I thought you were empty at the door, just yelling outside... By the way, how did you help her to change the article? Do you think she has a good character? Or sympathize with her being trampled on by the world?""It's just a matter of rushing to the writing, I gave her some suggestions, and she just wrote it out, I will help her see, don't mislead her." Zhuo Yu opened the door and looked back at him, "Can't you leave? Why are there so many questions about a little thing?""No, you Zhuo Dashen personally helped people write comments. There is no one before, you have never helped me read it, am I not curious? By the way, ask her to eat together, and introduce me to know. From now on it will be us The three looked up and looked down. They are all good neighbors.""She wrote for one night and sleeps today. Let's talk about it another day." Zhuo Yu pulled Liang Jun into the elevator from Chu Xiang's door and went downstairs to eat.Liang Jun looked at him and said: "I suspect that you two gave birth to something when I didn't know it, but I have no evidence."Zhuo Yu gave him a blank look, "Take away your imagination, great writer.",,,,...,,,,
