Chapter 218: 218
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The studio is not as hot as a closed studio. The shooting objects are children, and the schedule is much more relaxed than that of adults. Ice cubes, big fans and so on are prepared, but the hot weather doesn't fade by one or two points, and the children are still yelled by the heat.
Yuguo didn't know where to get a batch of plastic hats. A small electric fan was installed under the brim of the hat. As soon as he turned on the switch, he would blow the air. Whether it was cool or not. In addition, children who liked fresh food were immediately attracted and gathered around Yuguo to discuss the hat.
Wen Ying's hand was also stuffed with one. The color of the brim was different, most of them were candy color. This one of her happened to be gouache color, fresh and lovely. However, this kind of hat is not only ingenious, but also made of plastic. No matter how to adjust it, Wen Ying can't feel comfortable. She either hooks her hair or falls off when it's too big, which makes her very upset.
At this time, a pair of hands stretched out from the side, put her hair in, and then pressed the hat.
Wen Ying put it on and said to Lin Yi, "thank you." When she saw that Lin Yi's hat was still in her hand, she reached for it and prepared to "reciprocate".
Lin Yi didn't let her catch the hat.
“…… Don't you want me to wear it for you? "
When he saw that she was aggrieved, he knew immediately why she was acting But he lowered his voice and shook his head. "No, I don't want to wear it."
"Why?" She put her hand to her ear and made a gesture of listening carefully. "You tell me quietly, I won't talk to anyone else."
He pursed his lower lip, secretly jumped in his heart, and was adored by the girl. He bowed his head to fiddle with the fan hat and asked Aren't you afraid of being blown to your forehead by a fan? "
The girl looked at him with surprise.
Lin Yi
She made a "Puchi" sound and immediately covered her mouth.
The boy looked at her with deep eyes, but his eyes were watery, and his eyelashes were long and dense. He threw a fan and immediately turned his momentum into invisibility.
"Haven't you played before?" she asked
“…… No
"You don't have to worry. Look at me." She lowered her head close, a small fan hanging in front of her forehead, Hula hula, blowing up the tiny hair in front of her forehead, "isn't there anything?"
Lin Yi is not used to being so close to people. His ears are reddish and sweat comes out from the tip of his nose.
All of a sudden, the staff came to inform them: "Wen Ying, Lin Yi, you'll be in the next scene."
"Good."
Wen Ying turned to say hello.
The next scene is for three actors, Tao Jialin, Wen Ying and Lin Yi. Tao Jialin's role is the daughter of general Shenwei, that is, Yu Guo's younger sister in the play. She has a childhood relationship with Yue Yilin, who is played by Lin Yi. Because of her father and brother, Tao Jialin has been worshiping and yearning for soldiers since she was a child. She also wants to be a famous female general in history. Wearing a cape and holding a red tassel gun, she rushes into the enemy's camp like no one else.
So she also disguised herself as a man and entered the military camp. But she pretended to be playful. She was not a recruit. She just wore the boy's clothes and was put into the barracks by Yuguo, who couldn't beat her. That is to say, once found, her brother, as well as Yue Yili, who sheltered them, will be punished for violating the discipline. However, as soon as she comes in, she makes trouble and is found by Wen Ying.
Yue Yilin grew up with her when she was a child, and her relationship was good. When Chaoge discovered her identity, it happened that he and the role played by Tao Jialin were together. Still a child, he was in a hurry and disorganized. He threatened each other with Chaoge's life and told her not to say anything.
This is exactly the scene they are shooting. The three stand together. Lin Yi and Wen Ying are close to each other. He holds a prop dagger against Wen Ying's slender neck in his hand, and Tao Jialin is two steps away from them. This is a mountain forest with military training. There is no one around.
Lin Yi has a good sense of propriety in her hand, which can make people see that the dagger is oppressive, but it doesn't make Wen Ying feel uncomfortable.
As the scoreboard is down, the camera starts shooting.
Lin Yi raised his eyebrows and said, "don't tell anyone today. Do you understand?"
He plays Yue Yilin, a powerful and influential son who also acts in the military camp, but few people dare to interfere because of his backers. The reason why he entered the barracks was, on the one hand, for proper training, and on the other hand, to pave the way for achieving a high position and earning military merit in the future. Normal soldiers are recruited from the age of 15. They are only 11 or 2 years old. They only train and do not take part in war. They are more like a military academy, so they have the function of "gilding".
Lin Yi's acting skills are also amazing. At a young age, he is extremely indifferent outside the play. He only likes to read the script silently, and even has few people to find the lines. But as long as he enters the filming state, his aura will change immediately. He and Wen Ying are young actors with the least ng, and they usually eat ng because of the fault of their opponents.
The adult actors in the group often look at them and sigh. Fortunately, they were not born at the same time."Yue Yiyu." Wen Ying's face was not half afraid. Chao Ge, who was not afraid of power, began to show his strength. "Do you really dare to kill people?"
"Yue Yilin" had a loose hand, and his feet stepped back half a step. He immediately clenched it again. The dagger followed up an inch. The boy's handsome pale face showed a trace of ruthlessness. "I dare to kill wolves, but I'm afraid of you?"
His eyes have always laughed at her. After all, girls are delicate, and Chaoge has been laughed at frequently since she entered the military camp. But likewise, his trembling hand betrayed his fear.
They look at each other and smell that Ying is about to open her mouth, but they hear a line from the other side, "brother Yu, brother Yu, kill It's not good. "
Looking aside, the little girl played by Tao Jialin shivers and asks.
No.
It's not the time for Tao Jialin to take her lines.
However, there are many moments of improvisation, especially for child stars, who often have their own creativity and characteristics. Occasionally, director Lin will ask them to continue with one or two sentences. They will stop until the scene gets out of control. But at present, Tao Jialin's performance is still within the scope of the characters.
"If she tells us what happened today, we will both be punished."
"But that's killing people..."
"Do you understand? It doesn't matter if I'm punished. Your identity is the problem. " The boy said impatiently and coldly, "it's a capital crime for a woman to break into the barracks, and your father will be implicated by you."
This is the most fundamental reason for him to stand up. He never walked and began to be influenced by the interest disputes among the top management. His family is very close to general Shenwei, and he will never break his own arm. Besides, he wants to be the leader in the military camp, which is inseparable from general Shenwei.
"No, my father won't let me die!" She said, "I can't let my brother bear the reputation of killing people for me."
This is supposed to be a play dominated by Lin Yi and Wen Ying, but as Tao Jialin goes on sentence after sentence, unconsciously, the protagonist turns into her and Lin Yi. If Lin Yi abandons her in such a dialogue and continues to play with Wen Ying, it would be too blunt.
The people on the set felt the change in the atmosphere and were a little surprised.
Because most of them are military dramas, and most of the young actors are boys. Although Tao Jialin is the No.2 female, she has not been able to compete with Wen Ying.
Although it can be clearly seen that she has robbed the play, her acting skills lie in the fact that people who have not seen the script will not play, on the contrary, they will think that the female number two is more distinctive. Some people think that there has always been a lot of rumors on the set that Tao Jialin was the original Chaoge, but now it seems that it is not a lie.
Tao Jialin is proud. She doesn't believe that those people flatter Wen Ying, but because Wen Ying got the relationship with the heroine. Now she's not forced to play. Even if Uncle Lin stops because she's taking the lead in the show, we can see who is more powerful.
Yue Yilin originally just wanted to bully Chaoge not to reveal the secret, but now she was excited by the little girl, but raised her chin, "hum, what are you afraid of when you kill someone? Compared with us, her life is insignificant."
"Even so..."
The dialogue between the two is still going on, and Tao Jialin has completely entered the state.
However, at this time, the set suddenly came scornful laughter, interrupted the dialogue between the two.
This laugh attracted everyone's attention.
Laughter is extremely difficult to grasp in the lines, because in reality, no matter laughing, laughing, snickering, laughing, all come from the expression of people's heart, that is, when people's emotion reaches that point, it will spontaneously appear, on the contrary, if the emotion does not arrive, it will often show very stiff, a careless will let people play.
But Wen Ying can't, Chaoge's smile, because imitate the boy's tone and deliberately drop, and because just a long time did not speak, neck oppressed and slightly dumb.
It was a very irritating laugh.
Lin Yi naturally looks back at Wen Ying, and they look back at each other.
"What are you laughing at?"
Hearing Sakura's voice is still as dumb as laughter, and her lines are very good. She stared at each other and said, "you're killing me..." Her eyes began to look into his eyes and slowly swept down. Both the rhythm and the tension of her eyes were terrible. Even if she didn't face Yue Yilin, the onlookers also felt a different kind of embarrassment.
"If you don't kill, you have no seed."
The line goes on.
The timing is just right. Because of her laughter, the performance just now has become Yue Yilin's bluff caused by fear, which is completely in line with the character. Similarly, the simple lines and the performance full of tension set off Tao Jialin's series of lines.
It's like the foreshadowing before the outbreak of the plot, which makes people forget the existence of those lines and realize that this is the "dinner".
Tao Jialin suddenly found that Lin Yi's momentum suddenly rose, and burst out several times more terrifying than just now. It seems that it was just his casual interpretation, and now he began to take it seriously.
His "Yue Yili" was extremely angry. His eyes were really like a firelight leaping, and the light of the knife was inch by inch approaching Wen Ying.Wen Ying seems to be calm, but her face is taut. In fact, her muscles are taut and her fingertips are white. No one will notice such details. People who see her will only notice the information of "she is really nervous" in their heart. There is no need for lines between the two people, it seems that there is a spark splashing, which makes people unable to move their eyes.
Tao Jialin in such an atmosphere, completely become a foil, just a must exist "background board".
"I..."
She took a step forward, but her mind was blank. When her lines reached her throat, she couldn't say a word, and her ears were buzzing. The memory flashed through her mind, and she unconsciously remembered the phone she had answered.
"Linlin, you let mom down."
“……”
"I want you to be a supporting actress because I want you to be better than that girl. My mother and your agent can find a chance to discuss with the director and producer and let you replace her, but what have you done?"
"I, I haven't had my turn to play with her yet."
"Mom spent so much money asking the teacher to train you, and you have three years more time to act than others. Can you tell the difference between you only by acting in opposite plays?"
“…… It's their fault, Yuguo. They're all around Wenying now, boasting how good she is! " She was emotional and aggrieved and said, "they cheat. I don't want to play with them anymore!"
"Is there such a thing? It seems that this little girl is not simple. She knows how to win people's hearts when she is so young. " There was a pause on the other side for a moment, "mom told you how many times, you can't be by your own temperament. Whether it's Lin Yi, Yu Guo or Chen Zihan, their parents are very capable in this circle. If you get along well with them, these will be your resources. You see, the girl named Wen Ying knows. "
"What kind of resources? I'm very good now. So many people like me. Why should I be nice to them?"
"What's the use of your popularity now? Do you know how many child stars have passed away? Mom has to plan for your future. "
Tao Jialin said angrily: "then I will not be a star and go to do other things. Filming is so tiring. Other children can play. Why should I... "
"Tao Jialin!" Across the microphone came a very harsh voice, "are you still my daughter?"
“……”
"If your brother didn't like being a star, mom wouldn't spend all her time on you. Do you want me to feel that all the energy I spent on you was wasted?" The man on the other side sighed, "your brother has talent for acting since he was a child, and boys are willing to bear hardships. Unlike you, it's a pity..."
“…… I'm sorry, mom
"Just know what's wrong. You try to be better than Wen Ying, you know? Don't let mom down. "
Don't let mom down
She clenched her hand and looked at the two opposite people. It was hard for her to accommodate the performance of the third person. She just felt out of breath and couldn't speak any more. But she knows it's time for her lines. She has to speak. She can't let people laugh at her. She grabs the show when she shouldn't say it and can't say it when she should.
Try to
When they heard that Ying and Lin Yi found that the person who had to answer suddenly stopped speaking, the progress stopped, and the scene suddenly stagnated. In a moment, director Lin would stop and start again.
Wen Ying looks at the girl in front of her eyes, struggling and afraid. "Girls are trouble..." she said
Tao Jialin's pupils dilated and suddenly roared out: "can't a girl enter the military camp and serve the country?"
That one is not willing to express incisively and vividly!
"Of course."
As "Yue Yilin" was attracted away by the other party, the moment of relaxation, "Chaoge" grabbed his dagger and restrained him, "but it depends on how determined you are."
One is over.
Tao Jialin suddenly squatted on the ground as if exhausted.
Wen Ying walks up to Tao Jialin and squats down, praising her and saying, "the last part of the performance is very good."
Tao Jialin didn't speak. After smelling Ying Ying, she took out a wrinkled tissue from her costume pocket. In summer, she is prone to sweat, so she can always find a place to put a few tissue in her costume. See Tao Jialin did not answer, so she said: "not used."
Tao Jialin had just quietly shed tears, took the paper towel, suddenly "wow" to cry out.
She knew that the last outbreak was forced by them. Because of this, she saw the gap between herself and Wen Ying.
She didn't believe how good Wen Ying was. If she didn't experience it, she would never know the fear of being crushed, just like the fish being photographed on the shore, struggling to breathe.
Lin Yi, the same
She can't help thinking, if it's her who plays the role of "Chaoge" with him, can she play it well? Will she not be able to take Lin Yi's play, and the director will be dissatisfied with it and change people in the middle of the play
Her mother will be disappointed that she didn't perform well
The more she thought about it, the sadder she was. She kept the posture of taking the paper towel and cried bitterly."Are you all right?"
"Jialin's performance is good, breaking through the encirclement under the encirclement of the double kings. It's very powerful!"
"Is it too much to cry?" Yu Guo questions.
The friends gathered around to encourage and comfort.
Smell cherry touched her head, like to little sister, "don't be afraid, don't be afraid, our opponent play not much."
As soon as Tao Jialin's voice closed and looked at her, she burst into tears!
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after that, the relationship between the stars became more harmonious, the shooting progress was smooth, and the shooting time was earlier than expected.
Before the release of the film, there must be a lot of publicity activities.
Although Wen Ying's make-up photos are good-looking, and some of the theater and Reuters photos look decent, attracting some face powder, but the number of them together is like a faint firefly. When it comes to the stage of real publicity, whether it's on the Internet or some media reporters, they are still clinging to her replacing Tao Jialin for the sake of gimmicks.
When she and Lin Yi were interviewed as leading actors, most of the microphones were delivered to Lin Yi and asked quite mild and normal questions. One or two questions in front of her were quite harsh. If she was a child, she would have been scared to cry.
This thought once crossed, she thought strangely, isn't she a child?
Suddenly, she heard a reporter ask Lin Yi, "I heard that Ollie is going to go abroad with her parents for winter vacation?"
"Ollie?"
Someone caught her puzzled and answered meaningfully, "Lin Yi's English name is Ollie. Don't you know little Wen Ying?"
Most of the second generation of stars have English names. When they appear on the show, they usually use English names. Lin Yi's "Ollie" is well known. The last time they chased him in the square, they occasionally used this name, but Wen Ying didn't pay attention to it.
But her pause was that the name gave her a faint sense of familiarity
In the process of her slight stupefaction, the reporter who answered her was like a fly staring at an egg, and immediately asked: "you haven't even exchanged English names. Don't you have such a good relationship as you said when you publicized to the outside world?"
His question triggered a chain reaction,
"is the relationship with the crew really harmonious?"
"Have you ever been rejected because of the replacement incident?"
"It's said that my mother is the assistant costume designer of the production team?"
……
For a moment, the microphones moved to her one after another. However, the 12-year-old girl was just at the height of the adult's shoulder. They rushed to her in a ferocious manner. The microphone they handed over was out of proportion, as if they wanted to push her face.
"Go away!" Lin Yi suddenly put her arm behind her and said coldly, "stay away from her. Don't you see that she is afraid?"
The author has something to say: kneel down to plead guilty) found a long time easy to relax, I have secretly played, read a novel, super happiness! (beaten)
but it's really not very easy to write. Originally, several lines were written separately, because I found that the rhythm was inappropriate and I had to delete them.
For example, the conversation between the matchmaker's mother and the matchmaker was originally at the front, and more than 2000 words (...) were written as soon as they were written , deleted more than one thousand, and then when writing together tonight, I found a more appropriate setting. The original setting of the female match mother was that she wanted to be a star and instilled this idea into her daughter to make up for her regret. But I always feel that this part doesn't connect well with the reversal of the play. Today, chuanchuanzhao suddenly thought of the vulgar preference for boys, which is more in line with the theme of female generals. I hesitated again and again, because there was no foreshadowing and I was worried about being abrupt. After I changed it, I found that it was really abrupt, so I thought that I could combine the two versions into one There is a sentence that has been changed for nearly half an hour. I'm not very satisfied with it. I always feel that I still haven't expressed it clearly. Will it be cloudy? Or it's a bit abrupt. Look back and see how to fix it.
I tried to relax writing, and found that the efficiency is relatively low. In order not to be lazy and slack off, I'd better make a recovery day, but if I don't write it well, I will ask for leave on the bulletin board.
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The studio is not as hot as a closed studio. The shooting objects are children, and the schedule is much more relaxed than that of adults. Ice cubes, big fans and so on are prepared, but the hot weather doesn't fade by one or two points, and the children are still yelled by the heat.
Yuguo didn't know where to get a batch of plastic hats. A small electric fan was installed under the brim of the hat. As soon as he turned on the switch, he would blow the air. Whether it was cool or not. In addition, children who liked fresh food were immediately attracted and gathered around Yuguo to discuss the hat.
Wen Ying's hand was also stuffed with one. The color of the brim was different, most of them were candy color. This one of her happened to be gouache color, fresh and lovely. However, this kind of hat is not only ingenious, but also made of plastic. No matter how to adjust it, Wen Ying can't feel comfortable. She either hooks her hair or falls off when it's too big, which makes her very upset.
At this time, a pair of hands stretched out from the side, put her hair in, and then pressed the hat.
Wen Ying put it on and said to Lin Yi, "thank you." When she saw that Lin Yi's hat was still in her hand, she reached for it and prepared to "reciprocate".
Lin Yi didn't let her catch the hat.
“…… Don't you want me to wear it for you? "
When he saw that she was aggrieved, he knew immediately why she was acting But he lowered his voice and shook his head. "No, I don't want to wear it."
"Why?" She put her hand to her ear and made a gesture of listening carefully. "You tell me quietly, I won't talk to anyone else."
He pursed his lower lip, secretly jumped in his heart, and was adored by the girl. He bowed his head to fiddle with the fan hat and asked Aren't you afraid of being blown to your forehead by a fan? "
The girl looked at him with surprise.
Lin Yi
She made a "Puchi" sound and immediately covered her mouth.
The boy looked at her with deep eyes, but his eyes were watery, and his eyelashes were long and dense. He threw a fan and immediately turned his momentum into invisibility.
"Haven't you played before?" she asked
“…… No
"You don't have to worry. Look at me." She lowered her head close, a small fan hanging in front of her forehead, Hula hula, blowing up the tiny hair in front of her forehead, "isn't there anything?"
Lin Yi is not used to being so close to people. His ears are reddish and sweat comes out from the tip of his nose.
All of a sudden, the staff came to inform them: "Wen Ying, Lin Yi, you'll be in the next scene."
"Good."
Wen Ying turned to say hello.
The next scene is for three actors, Tao Jialin, Wen Ying and Lin Yi. Tao Jialin's role is the daughter of general Shenwei, that is, Yu Guo's younger sister in the play. She has a childhood relationship with Yue Yilin, who is played by Lin Yi. Because of her father and brother, Tao Jialin has been worshiping and yearning for soldiers since she was a child. She also wants to be a famous female general in history. Wearing a cape and holding a red tassel gun, she rushes into the enemy's camp like no one else.
So she also disguised herself as a man and entered the military camp. But she pretended to be playful. She was not a recruit. She just wore the boy's clothes and was put into the barracks by Yuguo, who couldn't beat her. That is to say, once found, her brother, as well as Yue Yili, who sheltered them, will be punished for violating the discipline. However, as soon as she comes in, she makes trouble and is found by Wen Ying.
Yue Yilin grew up with her when she was a child, and her relationship was good. When Chaoge discovered her identity, it happened that he and the role played by Tao Jialin were together. Still a child, he was in a hurry and disorganized. He threatened each other with Chaoge's life and told her not to say anything.
This is exactly the scene they are shooting. The three stand together. Lin Yi and Wen Ying are close to each other. He holds a prop dagger against Wen Ying's slender neck in his hand, and Tao Jialin is two steps away from them. This is a mountain forest with military training. There is no one around.
Lin Yi has a good sense of propriety in her hand, which can make people see that the dagger is oppressive, but it doesn't make Wen Ying feel uncomfortable.
As the scoreboard is down, the camera starts shooting.
Lin Yi raised his eyebrows and said, "don't tell anyone today. Do you understand?"
He plays Yue Yilin, a powerful and influential son who also acts in the military camp, but few people dare to interfere because of his backers. The reason why he entered the barracks was, on the one hand, for proper training, and on the other hand, to pave the way for achieving a high position and earning military merit in the future. Normal soldiers are recruited from the age of 15. They are only 11 or 2 years old. They only train and do not take part in war. They are more like a military academy, so they have the function of "gilding".
Lin Yi's acting skills are also amazing. At a young age, he is extremely indifferent outside the play. He only likes to read the script silently, and even has few people to find the lines. But as long as he enters the filming state, his aura will change immediately. He and Wen Ying are young actors with the least ng, and they usually eat ng because of the fault of their opponents.
The adult actors in the group often look at them and sigh. Fortunately, they were not born at the same time."Yue Yiyu." Wen Ying's face was not half afraid. Chao Ge, who was not afraid of power, began to show his strength. "Do you really dare to kill people?"
"Yue Yilin" had a loose hand, and his feet stepped back half a step. He immediately clenched it again. The dagger followed up an inch. The boy's handsome pale face showed a trace of ruthlessness. "I dare to kill wolves, but I'm afraid of you?"
His eyes have always laughed at her. After all, girls are delicate, and Chaoge has been laughed at frequently since she entered the military camp. But likewise, his trembling hand betrayed his fear.
They look at each other and smell that Ying is about to open her mouth, but they hear a line from the other side, "brother Yu, brother Yu, kill It's not good. "
Looking aside, the little girl played by Tao Jialin shivers and asks.
No.
It's not the time for Tao Jialin to take her lines.
However, there are many moments of improvisation, especially for child stars, who often have their own creativity and characteristics. Occasionally, director Lin will ask them to continue with one or two sentences. They will stop until the scene gets out of control. But at present, Tao Jialin's performance is still within the scope of the characters.
"If she tells us what happened today, we will both be punished."
"But that's killing people..."
"Do you understand? It doesn't matter if I'm punished. Your identity is the problem. " The boy said impatiently and coldly, "it's a capital crime for a woman to break into the barracks, and your father will be implicated by you."
This is the most fundamental reason for him to stand up. He never walked and began to be influenced by the interest disputes among the top management. His family is very close to general Shenwei, and he will never break his own arm. Besides, he wants to be the leader in the military camp, which is inseparable from general Shenwei.
"No, my father won't let me die!" She said, "I can't let my brother bear the reputation of killing people for me."
This is supposed to be a play dominated by Lin Yi and Wen Ying, but as Tao Jialin goes on sentence after sentence, unconsciously, the protagonist turns into her and Lin Yi. If Lin Yi abandons her in such a dialogue and continues to play with Wen Ying, it would be too blunt.
The people on the set felt the change in the atmosphere and were a little surprised.
Because most of them are military dramas, and most of the young actors are boys. Although Tao Jialin is the No.2 female, she has not been able to compete with Wen Ying.
Although it can be clearly seen that she has robbed the play, her acting skills lie in the fact that people who have not seen the script will not play, on the contrary, they will think that the female number two is more distinctive. Some people think that there has always been a lot of rumors on the set that Tao Jialin was the original Chaoge, but now it seems that it is not a lie.
Tao Jialin is proud. She doesn't believe that those people flatter Wen Ying, but because Wen Ying got the relationship with the heroine. Now she's not forced to play. Even if Uncle Lin stops because she's taking the lead in the show, we can see who is more powerful.
Yue Yilin originally just wanted to bully Chaoge not to reveal the secret, but now she was excited by the little girl, but raised her chin, "hum, what are you afraid of when you kill someone? Compared with us, her life is insignificant."
"Even so..."
The dialogue between the two is still going on, and Tao Jialin has completely entered the state.
However, at this time, the set suddenly came scornful laughter, interrupted the dialogue between the two.
This laugh attracted everyone's attention.
Laughter is extremely difficult to grasp in the lines, because in reality, no matter laughing, laughing, snickering, laughing, all come from the expression of people's heart, that is, when people's emotion reaches that point, it will spontaneously appear, on the contrary, if the emotion does not arrive, it will often show very stiff, a careless will let people play.
But Wen Ying can't, Chaoge's smile, because imitate the boy's tone and deliberately drop, and because just a long time did not speak, neck oppressed and slightly dumb.
It was a very irritating laugh.
Lin Yi naturally looks back at Wen Ying, and they look back at each other.
"What are you laughing at?"
Hearing Sakura's voice is still as dumb as laughter, and her lines are very good. She stared at each other and said, "you're killing me..." Her eyes began to look into his eyes and slowly swept down. Both the rhythm and the tension of her eyes were terrible. Even if she didn't face Yue Yilin, the onlookers also felt a different kind of embarrassment.
"If you don't kill, you have no seed."
The line goes on.
The timing is just right. Because of her laughter, the performance just now has become Yue Yilin's bluff caused by fear, which is completely in line with the character. Similarly, the simple lines and the performance full of tension set off Tao Jialin's series of lines.
It's like the foreshadowing before the outbreak of the plot, which makes people forget the existence of those lines and realize that this is the "dinner".
Tao Jialin suddenly found that Lin Yi's momentum suddenly rose, and burst out several times more terrifying than just now. It seems that it was just his casual interpretation, and now he began to take it seriously.
His "Yue Yili" was extremely angry. His eyes were really like a firelight leaping, and the light of the knife was inch by inch approaching Wen Ying.Wen Ying seems to be calm, but her face is taut. In fact, her muscles are taut and her fingertips are white. No one will notice such details. People who see her will only notice the information of "she is really nervous" in their heart. There is no need for lines between the two people, it seems that there is a spark splashing, which makes people unable to move their eyes.
Tao Jialin in such an atmosphere, completely become a foil, just a must exist "background board".
"I..."
She took a step forward, but her mind was blank. When her lines reached her throat, she couldn't say a word, and her ears were buzzing. The memory flashed through her mind, and she unconsciously remembered the phone she had answered.
"Linlin, you let mom down."
“……”
"I want you to be a supporting actress because I want you to be better than that girl. My mother and your agent can find a chance to discuss with the director and producer and let you replace her, but what have you done?"
"I, I haven't had my turn to play with her yet."
"Mom spent so much money asking the teacher to train you, and you have three years more time to act than others. Can you tell the difference between you only by acting in opposite plays?"
“…… It's their fault, Yuguo. They're all around Wenying now, boasting how good she is! " She was emotional and aggrieved and said, "they cheat. I don't want to play with them anymore!"
"Is there such a thing? It seems that this little girl is not simple. She knows how to win people's hearts when she is so young. " There was a pause on the other side for a moment, "mom told you how many times, you can't be by your own temperament. Whether it's Lin Yi, Yu Guo or Chen Zihan, their parents are very capable in this circle. If you get along well with them, these will be your resources. You see, the girl named Wen Ying knows. "
"What kind of resources? I'm very good now. So many people like me. Why should I be nice to them?"
"What's the use of your popularity now? Do you know how many child stars have passed away? Mom has to plan for your future. "
Tao Jialin said angrily: "then I will not be a star and go to do other things. Filming is so tiring. Other children can play. Why should I... "
"Tao Jialin!" Across the microphone came a very harsh voice, "are you still my daughter?"
“……”
"If your brother didn't like being a star, mom wouldn't spend all her time on you. Do you want me to feel that all the energy I spent on you was wasted?" The man on the other side sighed, "your brother has talent for acting since he was a child, and boys are willing to bear hardships. Unlike you, it's a pity..."
“…… I'm sorry, mom
"Just know what's wrong. You try to be better than Wen Ying, you know? Don't let mom down. "
Don't let mom down
She clenched her hand and looked at the two opposite people. It was hard for her to accommodate the performance of the third person. She just felt out of breath and couldn't speak any more. But she knows it's time for her lines. She has to speak. She can't let people laugh at her. She grabs the show when she shouldn't say it and can't say it when she should.
Try to
When they heard that Ying and Lin Yi found that the person who had to answer suddenly stopped speaking, the progress stopped, and the scene suddenly stagnated. In a moment, director Lin would stop and start again.
Wen Ying looks at the girl in front of her eyes, struggling and afraid. "Girls are trouble..." she said
Tao Jialin's pupils dilated and suddenly roared out: "can't a girl enter the military camp and serve the country?"
That one is not willing to express incisively and vividly!
"Of course."
As "Yue Yilin" was attracted away by the other party, the moment of relaxation, "Chaoge" grabbed his dagger and restrained him, "but it depends on how determined you are."
One is over.
Tao Jialin suddenly squatted on the ground as if exhausted.
Wen Ying walks up to Tao Jialin and squats down, praising her and saying, "the last part of the performance is very good."
Tao Jialin didn't speak. After smelling Ying Ying, she took out a wrinkled tissue from her costume pocket. In summer, she is prone to sweat, so she can always find a place to put a few tissue in her costume. See Tao Jialin did not answer, so she said: "not used."
Tao Jialin had just quietly shed tears, took the paper towel, suddenly "wow" to cry out.
She knew that the last outbreak was forced by them. Because of this, she saw the gap between herself and Wen Ying.
She didn't believe how good Wen Ying was. If she didn't experience it, she would never know the fear of being crushed, just like the fish being photographed on the shore, struggling to breathe.
Lin Yi, the same
She can't help thinking, if it's her who plays the role of "Chaoge" with him, can she play it well? Will she not be able to take Lin Yi's play, and the director will be dissatisfied with it and change people in the middle of the play
Her mother will be disappointed that she didn't perform well
The more she thought about it, the sadder she was. She kept the posture of taking the paper towel and cried bitterly."Are you all right?"
"Jialin's performance is good, breaking through the encirclement under the encirclement of the double kings. It's very powerful!"
"Is it too much to cry?" Yu Guo questions.
The friends gathered around to encourage and comfort.
Smell cherry touched her head, like to little sister, "don't be afraid, don't be afraid, our opponent play not much."
As soon as Tao Jialin's voice closed and looked at her, she burst into tears!
*
after that, the relationship between the stars became more harmonious, the shooting progress was smooth, and the shooting time was earlier than expected.
Before the release of the film, there must be a lot of publicity activities.
Although Wen Ying's make-up photos are good-looking, and some of the theater and Reuters photos look decent, attracting some face powder, but the number of them together is like a faint firefly. When it comes to the stage of real publicity, whether it's on the Internet or some media reporters, they are still clinging to her replacing Tao Jialin for the sake of gimmicks.
When she and Lin Yi were interviewed as leading actors, most of the microphones were delivered to Lin Yi and asked quite mild and normal questions. One or two questions in front of her were quite harsh. If she was a child, she would have been scared to cry.
This thought once crossed, she thought strangely, isn't she a child?
Suddenly, she heard a reporter ask Lin Yi, "I heard that Ollie is going to go abroad with her parents for winter vacation?"
"Ollie?"
Someone caught her puzzled and answered meaningfully, "Lin Yi's English name is Ollie. Don't you know little Wen Ying?"
Most of the second generation of stars have English names. When they appear on the show, they usually use English names. Lin Yi's "Ollie" is well known. The last time they chased him in the square, they occasionally used this name, but Wen Ying didn't pay attention to it.
But her pause was that the name gave her a faint sense of familiarity
In the process of her slight stupefaction, the reporter who answered her was like a fly staring at an egg, and immediately asked: "you haven't even exchanged English names. Don't you have such a good relationship as you said when you publicized to the outside world?"
His question triggered a chain reaction,
"is the relationship with the crew really harmonious?"
"Have you ever been rejected because of the replacement incident?"
"It's said that my mother is the assistant costume designer of the production team?"
……
For a moment, the microphones moved to her one after another. However, the 12-year-old girl was just at the height of the adult's shoulder. They rushed to her in a ferocious manner. The microphone they handed over was out of proportion, as if they wanted to push her face.
"Go away!" Lin Yi suddenly put her arm behind her and said coldly, "stay away from her. Don't you see that she is afraid?"
The author has something to say: kneel down to plead guilty) found a long time easy to relax, I have secretly played, read a novel, super happiness! (beaten)
but it's really not very easy to write. Originally, several lines were written separately, because I found that the rhythm was inappropriate and I had to delete them.
For example, the conversation between the matchmaker's mother and the matchmaker was originally at the front, and more than 2000 words (...) were written as soon as they were written , deleted more than one thousand, and then when writing together tonight, I found a more appropriate setting. The original setting of the female match mother was that she wanted to be a star and instilled this idea into her daughter to make up for her regret. But I always feel that this part doesn't connect well with the reversal of the play. Today, chuanchuanzhao suddenly thought of the vulgar preference for boys, which is more in line with the theme of female generals. I hesitated again and again, because there was no foreshadowing and I was worried about being abrupt. After I changed it, I found that it was really abrupt, so I thought that I could combine the two versions into one There is a sentence that has been changed for nearly half an hour. I'm not very satisfied with it. I always feel that I still haven't expressed it clearly. Will it be cloudy? Or it's a bit abrupt. Look back and see how to fix it.
I tried to relax writing, and found that the efficiency is relatively low. In order not to be lazy and slack off, I'd better make a recovery day, but if I don't write it well, I will ask for leave on the bulletin board.
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because of stealing, I feel guilty. I send a red envelope to express my apology. 50 people in the front row send a red envelope. Send another 50 random red packets to the girls who didn't get them in the back row!
PS: just for the sake of the red envelope, the girl can give a score of 0, so as not to be asked to give a score.
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The studio is not as hot as a closed studio. The shooting objects are children, and the schedule is much more relaxed than that of adults. Ice cubes, big fans and so on are prepared, but the hot weather doesn't fade by one or two points, and the children are still yelled by the heat. Yuguo didn't know where to get a batch of plastic hats. A small electric fan was installed under the brim of the hat. As soon as he turned on the switch, he would blow the air. Whether it was cool or not. In addition, children who liked fresh food were immediately attracted and gathered around Yuguo to discuss the hat. Wen Ying's hand was also stuffed with one. The color of the brim was different, most of them were candy color. This one of her happened to be gouache color, fresh and lovely. However, this kind of hat is not only ingenious, but also made of plastic. No matter how to adjust it, Wen Ying can't feel comfortable. She either hooks her hair or falls off when it's too big, which makes her very upset. At this time, a pair of hands stretched out from the side, put her hair in, and then pressed the hat. Wen Ying put it on and said to Lin Yi, "thank you." When she saw that Lin Yi's hat was still in her hand, she reached for it and prepared to "reciprocate". Lin Yi didn't let her catch the hat. Don't you want me to wear it for you? " When he saw that she was aggrieved, he knew immediately why she was acting But he lowered his voice and shook his head. "No, I don't want to wear it." "Why?" She put her hand to her ear and made a gesture of listening carefully. "You tell me quietly, I won't talk to anyone else." He pursed his lower lip, secretly jumped in his heart, and was adored by the girl. He bowed his head to fiddle with the fan hat and asked Aren't you afraid of being blown to your forehead by a fan? " The girl looked at him with surprise. Lin Yi She made a "Puchi" sound and immediately covered her mouth. The boy looked at her with deep eyes, but his eyes were watery, and his eyelashes were long and dense. He threw a fan and immediately turned his momentum into invisibility. "Haven't you played before?" she asked No "You don't have to worry. Look at me." She lowered her head close, a small fan hanging in front of her forehead, Hula hula, blowing up the tiny hair in front of her forehead, "isn't there anything?" Lin Yi is not used to being so close to people. His ears are reddish and sweat comes out from the tip of his nose. All of a sudden, the staff came to inform them: "Wen Ying, Lin Yi, you'll be in the next scene." "Good." Wen Ying turned to say hello. The next scene is for three actors, Tao Jialin, Wen Ying and Lin Yi. Tao Jialin's role is the daughter of general Shenwei, that is, Yu Guo's younger sister in the play. She has a childhood relationship with Yue Yilin, who is played by Lin Yi. Because of her father and brother, Tao Jialin has been worshiping and yearning for soldiers since she was a child. She also wants to be a famous female general in history. Wearing a cape and holding a red tassel gun, she rushes into the enemy's camp like no one else. So she also disguised herself as a man and entered the military camp. But she pretended to be playful. She was not a recruit. She just wore the boy's clothes and was put into the barracks by Yuguo, who couldn't beat her. That is to say, once found, her brother, as well as Yue Yili, who sheltered them, will be punished for violating the discipline. However, as soon as she comes in, she makes trouble and is found by Wen Ying. Yue Yilin grew up with her when she was a child, and her relationship was good. When Chaoge discovered her identity, it happened that he and the role played by Tao Jialin were together. Still a child, he was in a hurry and disorganized. He threatened each other with Chaoge's life and told her not to say anything. This is exactly the scene they are shooting. The three stand together. Lin Yi and Wen Ying are close to each other. He holds a prop dagger against Wen Ying's slender neck in his hand, and Tao Jialin is two steps away from them. This is a mountain forest with military training. There is no one around. Lin Yi has a good sense of propriety in her hand, which can make people see that the dagger is oppressive, but it doesn't make Wen Ying feel uncomfortable. As the scoreboard is down, the camera starts shooting. Lin Yi raised his eyebrows and said, "don't tell anyone today. Do you understand?" He plays Yue Yilin, a powerful and influential son who also acts in the military camp, but few people dare to interfere because of his backers. The reason why he entered the barracks was, on the one hand, for proper training, and on the other hand, to pave the way for achieving a high position and earning military merit in the future. Normal soldiers are recruited from the age of 15. They are only 11 or 2 years old. They only train and do not take part in war. They are more like a military academy, so they have the function of "gilding". Lin Yi's acting skills are also amazing. At a young age, he is extremely indifferent outside the play. He only likes to read the script silently, and even has few people to find the lines. But as long as he enters the filming state, his aura will change immediately. He and Wen Ying are young actors with the least ng, and they usually eat ng because of the fault of their opponents. The adult actors in the group often look at them and sigh. Fortunately, they were not born at the same time."Yue Yiyu." Wen Ying's face was not half afraid. Chao Ge, who was not afraid of power, began to show his strength. "Do you really dare to kill people?" "Yue Yilin" had a loose hand, and his feet stepped back half a step. He immediately clenched it again. The dagger followed up an inch. The boy's handsome pale face showed a trace of ruthlessness. "I dare to kill wolves, but I'm afraid of you?" His eyes have always laughed at her. After all, girls are delicate, and Chaoge has been laughed at frequently since she entered the military camp. But likewise, his trembling hand betrayed his fear. They look at each other and smell that Ying is about to open her mouth, but they hear a line from the other side, "brother Yu, brother Yu, kill It's not good. " Looking aside, the little girl played by Tao Jialin shivers and asks. No. It's not the time for Tao Jialin to take her lines. However, there are many moments of improvisation, especially for child stars, who often have their own creativity and characteristics. Occasionally, director Lin will ask them to continue with one or two sentences. They will stop until the scene gets out of control. But at present, Tao Jialin's performance is still within the scope of the characters. "If she tells us what happened today, we will both be punished." "But that's killing people..." "Do you understand? It doesn't matter if I'm punished. Your identity is the problem. " The boy said impatiently and coldly, "it's a capital crime for a woman to break into the barracks, and your father will be implicated by you." This is the most fundamental reason for him to stand up. He never walked and began to be influenced by the interest disputes among the top management. His family is very close to general Shenwei, and he will never break his own arm. Besides, he wants to be the leader in the military camp, which is inseparable from general Shenwei. "No, my father won't let me die!" She said, "I can't let my brother bear the reputation of killing people for me." This is supposed to be a play dominated by Lin Yi and Wen Ying, but as Tao Jialin goes on sentence after sentence, unconsciously, the protagonist turns into her and Lin Yi. If Lin Yi abandons her in such a dialogue and continues to play with Wen Ying, it would be too blunt. The people on the set felt the change in the atmosphere and were a little surprised. Because most of them are military dramas, and most of the young actors are boys. Although Tao Jialin is the No.2 female, she has not been able to compete with Wen Ying. Although it can be clearly seen that she has robbed the play, her acting skills lie in the fact that people who have not seen the script will not play, on the contrary, they will think that the female number two is more distinctive. Some people think that there has always been a lot of rumors on the set that Tao Jialin was the original Chaoge, but now it seems that it is not a lie. Tao Jialin is proud. She doesn't believe that those people flatter Wen Ying, but because Wen Ying got the relationship with the heroine. Now she's not forced to play. Even if Uncle Lin stops because she's taking the lead in the show, we can see who is more powerful. Yue Yilin originally just wanted to bully Chaoge not to reveal the secret, but now she was excited by the little girl, but raised her chin, "hum, what are you afraid of when you kill someone? Compared with us, her life is insignificant." "Even so..." The dialogue between the two is still going on, and Tao Jialin has completely entered the state. However, at this time, the set suddenly came scornful laughter, interrupted the dialogue between the two. This laugh attracted everyone's attention. Laughter is extremely difficult to grasp in the lines, because in reality, no matter laughing, laughing, snickering, laughing, all come from the expression of people's heart, that is, when people's emotion reaches that point, it will spontaneously appear, on the contrary, if the emotion does not arrive, it will often show very stiff, a careless will let people play. But Wen Ying can't, Chaoge's smile, because imitate the boy's tone and deliberately drop, and because just a long time did not speak, neck oppressed and slightly dumb. It was a very irritating laugh. Lin Yi naturally looks back at Wen Ying, and they look back at each other. "What are you laughing at?" Hearing Sakura's voice is still as dumb as laughter, and her lines are very good. She stared at each other and said, "you're killing me..." Her eyes began to look into his eyes and slowly swept down. Both the rhythm and the tension of her eyes were terrible. Even if she didn't face Yue Yilin, the onlookers also felt a different kind of embarrassment. "If you don't kill, you have no seed." The line goes on. The timing is just right. Because of her laughter, the performance just now has become Yue Yilin's bluff caused by fear, which is completely in line with the character. Similarly, the simple lines and the performance full of tension set off Tao Jialin's series of lines. It's like the foreshadowing before the outbreak of the plot, which makes people forget the existence of those lines and realize that this is the "dinner". Tao Jialin suddenly found that Lin Yi's momentum suddenly rose, and burst out several times more terrifying than just now. It seems that it was just his casual interpretation, and now he began to take it seriously. His "Yue Yili" was extremely angry. His eyes were really like a firelight leaping, and the light of the knife was inch by inch approaching Wen Ying.Wen Ying seems to be calm, but her face is taut. In fact, her muscles are taut and her fingertips are white. No one will notice such details. People who see her will only notice the information of "she is really nervous" in their heart. There is no need for lines between the two people, it seems that there is a spark splashing, which makes people unable to move their eyes. Tao Jialin in such an atmosphere, completely become a foil, just a must exist "background board". "I..." She took a step forward, but her mind was blank. When her lines reached her throat, she couldn't say a word, and her ears were buzzing. The memory flashed through her mind, and she unconsciously remembered the phone she had answered. "Linlin, you let mom down." "I want you to be a supporting actress because I want you to be better than that girl. My mother and your agent can find a chance to discuss with the director and producer and let you replace her, but what have you done?" "I, I haven't had my turn to play with her yet." "Mom spent so much money asking the teacher to train you, and you have three years more time to act than others. Can you tell the difference between you only by acting in opposite plays?" It's their fault, Yuguo. They're all around Wenying now, boasting how good she is! " She was emotional and aggrieved and said, "they cheat. I don't want to play with them anymore!" "Is there such a thing? It seems that this little girl is not simple. She knows how to win people's hearts when she is so young. " There was a pause on the other side for a moment, "mom told you how many times, you can't be by your own temperament. Whether it's Lin Yi, Yu Guo or Chen Zihan, their parents are very capable in this circle. If you get along well with them, these will be your resources. You see, the girl named Wen Ying knows. " "What kind of resources? I'm very good now. So many people like me. Why should I be nice to them?" "What's the use of your popularity now? Do you know how many child stars have passed away? Mom has to plan for your future. " Tao Jialin said angrily: "then I will not be a star and go to do other things. Filming is so tiring. Other children can play. Why should I... " "Tao Jialin!" Across the microphone came a very harsh voice, "are you still my daughter?" "If your brother didn't like being a star, mom wouldn't spend all her time on you. Do you want me to feel that all the energy I spent on you was wasted?" The man on the other side sighed, "your brother has talent for acting since he was a child, and boys are willing to bear hardships. Unlike you, it's a pity..." I'm sorry, mom "Just know what's wrong. You try to be better than Wen Ying, you know? Don't let mom down. " Don't let mom down She clenched her hand and looked at the two opposite people. It was hard for her to accommodate the performance of the third person. She just felt out of breath and couldn't speak any more. But she knows it's time for her lines. She has to speak. She can't let people laugh at her. She grabs the show when she shouldn't say it and can't say it when she should. Try to When they heard that Ying and Lin Yi found that the person who had to answer suddenly stopped speaking, the progress stopped, and the scene suddenly stagnated. In a moment, director Lin would stop and start again. Wen Ying looks at the girl in front of her eyes, struggling and afraid. "Girls are trouble..." she said Tao Jialin's pupils dilated and suddenly roared out: "can't a girl enter the military camp and serve the country?" That one is not willing to express incisively and vividly! "Of course." As "Yue Yilin" was attracted away by the other party, the moment of relaxation, "Chaoge" grabbed his dagger and restrained him, "but it depends on how determined you are." One is over. Tao Jialin suddenly squatted on the ground as if exhausted. Wen Ying walks up to Tao Jialin and squats down, praising her and saying, "the last part of the performance is very good." Tao Jialin didn't speak. After smelling Ying Ying, she took out a wrinkled tissue from her costume pocket. In summer, she is prone to sweat, so she can always find a place to put a few tissue in her costume. See Tao Jialin did not answer, so she said: "not used." Tao Jialin had just quietly shed tears, took the paper towel, suddenly "wow" to cry out. She knew that the last outbreak was forced by them. Because of this, she saw the gap between herself and Wen Ying. She didn't believe how good Wen Ying was. If she didn't experience it, she would never know the fear of being crushed, just like the fish being photographed on the shore, struggling to breathe. Lin Yi, the same She can't help thinking, if it's her who plays the role of "Chaoge" with him, can she play it well? Will she not be able to take Lin Yi's play, and the director will be dissatisfied with it and change people in the middle of the play Her mother will be disappointed that she didn't perform well The more she thought about it, the sadder she was. She kept the posture of taking the paper towel and cried bitterly."Are you all right?" "Jialin's performance is good, breaking through the encirclement under the encirclement of the double kings. It's very powerful!" "Is it too much to cry?" Yu Guo questions. The friends gathered around to encourage and comfort. Smell cherry touched her head, like to little sister, "don't be afraid, don't be afraid, our opponent play not much." As soon as Tao Jialin's voice closed and looked at her, she burst into tears! *after that, the relationship between the stars became more harmonious, the shooting progress was smooth, and the shooting time was earlier than expected. Before the release of the film, there must be a lot of publicity activities. Although Wen Ying's make-up photos are good-looking, and some of the theater and Reuters photos look decent, attracting some face powder, but the number of them together is like a faint firefly. When it comes to the stage of real publicity, whether it's on the Internet or some media reporters, they are still clinging to her replacing Tao Jialin for the sake of gimmicks. When she and Lin Yi were interviewed as leading actors, most of the microphones were delivered to Lin Yi and asked quite mild and normal questions. One or two questions in front of her were quite harsh. If she was a child, she would have been scared to cry. This thought once crossed, she thought strangely, isn't she a child? Suddenly, she heard a reporter ask Lin Yi, "I heard that Ollie is going to go abroad with her parents for winter vacation?" "Ollie?" Someone caught her puzzled and answered meaningfully, "Lin Yi's English name is Ollie. Don't you know little Wen Ying?" Most of the second generation of stars have English names. When they appear on the show, they usually use English names. Lin Yi's "Ollie" is well known. The last time they chased him in the square, they occasionally used this name, but Wen Ying didn't pay attention to it. But her pause was that the name gave her a faint sense of familiarity In the process of her slight stupefaction, the reporter who answered her was like a fly staring at an egg, and immediately asked: "you haven't even exchanged English names. Don't you have such a good relationship as you said when you publicized to the outside world?" His question triggered a chain reaction, "is the relationship with the crew really harmonious?" "Have you ever been rejected because of the replacement incident?" "It's said that my mother is the assistant costume designer of the production team?" For a moment, the microphones moved to her one after another. However, the 12-year-old girl was just at the height of the adult's shoulder. They rushed to her in a ferocious manner. The microphone they handed over was out of proportion, as if they wanted to push her face. "Go away!" Lin Yi suddenly put her arm behind her and said coldly, "stay away from her. Don't you see that she is afraid?" The author has something to say: kneel down to plead guilty found a long time easy to relax, I have secretly played, read a novel, super happiness! beaten but it's really not very easy to write. Originally, several lines were written separately, because I found that the rhythm was inappropriate and I had to delete them. For example, the conversation between the matchmaker's mother and the matchmaker was originally at the front, and more than 2000 words ... were written as soon as they were written , deleted more than one thousand, and then when writing together tonight, I found a more appropriate setting. The original setting of the female match mother was that she wanted to be a star and instilled this idea into her daughter to make up for her regret. But I always feel that this part doesn't connect well with the reversal of the play. Today, chuanchuanzhao suddenly thought of the vulgar preference for boys, which is more in line with the theme of female generals. I hesitated again and again, because there was no foreshadowing and I was worried about being abrupt. After I changed it, I found that it was really abrupt, so I thought that I could combine the two versions into one There is a sentence that has been changed for nearly half an hour. I'm not very satisfied with it. I always feel that I still haven't expressed it clearly. Will it be cloudy? Or it's a bit abrupt. Look back and see how to fix it. I tried to relax writing, and found that the efficiency is relatively low. In order not to be lazy and slack off, I'd better make a recovery day, but if I don't write it well, I will ask for leave on the bulletin board. -because of stealing, I feel guilty. I send a red envelope to express my apology. 50 people in the front row send a red envelope. Send another 50 random red packets to the girls who didn't get them in the back row! PS: just for the sake of the red envelope, the girl can give a score of 0, so as not to be asked to give a score. www.mylovenovel.com , the fastest update of the webnovel!
